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和时间,说,再见
冬至将至
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PostPosted: 2013-04-13 12:32:48    Post subject: 和时间,说,再见 Reply with quote

在时间的左边,画个圈,装满想念,一滴一点
在时间的右边,张只帆,从东从西,绕地球转
可,时间,假如,丰盈无边,何必,留个想念,让自己,磕磕绊绊

前方,白云飞翻,春风微软
何不,留个想念
在风暴眼中做帆寂寞的舞伴

前方,绿叶翠鲜,水浪澹澹
何不,留个想念
在碧岛怀中做自我的魂鸳

如果,没有想念
在时间的右边,或许还有老掉伟岸的白帆,

白帆,白帆,逝成灰烟

如果,没有想念,
没有白帆

索性,忘掉自己,忘掉想念
和时间,说,再见。
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2013-04-13 14:29:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

逝成灰烟
我的魂鸳
春风微软
水浪澹澹

——词语搭配牵强!
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