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小诗三首

岷江一苇
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Posted: 2013-04-10 08:46:09 Post subject: 小诗三首

错过我上山时你已下山我们在半山腰相遇擦肩而过后你是否回首跷跷板你在这头我在那头假如能送你上天堂我愿下地狱停风，停了雨，也停了不停的是我们的心渐行渐远......

山城子
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Posted: 2013-04-10 09:45:43 Post subject:

跷跷板你在这头我在那头假如能送你上天堂我愿下地狱 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

岷江一苇
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Posted: 2013-04-10 10:11:32 Post subject:

谢谢山城老师赏读！上午好！

守墓人笔记
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Posted: 2013-04-10 11:42:37 Post subject:

有些平，但第一首好些

岷江一苇
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Posted: 2013-04-10 11:48:27 Post subject:

谢谢赏读并指出不足！问好！

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