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梵高的耳朵

谭剑飞
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Posted: 2013-04-06 16:30:55 Post subject: 梵高的耳朵

深夜里，我小心翼翼的做着各种动作。烧水，吃药，打喷嚏。如同殇爱了的男女，极力的去挽救爱情，结果，是布满冰冷的盔甲的火车，对开相向呼啸而去。接近烧开的水，嗡嗡嗡的作响；闷热的喷嚏，仿佛六月里的霹雳，阵阵来袭。—— 面红耳赤，没有涕流。受够了。受够了这一切。疯狂的把插座切掉，把药囫囵吞掉。灯灭了。结束了。这一夜，我在安静中睡去，死尸一般。强忍着口的创伤。混沌中，我看到了，梵高那一只受伤的耳朵，裹着厚厚的纱布。是那样清晰。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-04-07 14:15:48 Post subject:

梵高那一只受伤的耳朵，裹着厚厚的纱布。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

谭剑飞
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Posted: 2013-04-07 17:04:47 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

梵高那一只受伤的耳朵，
裹着厚厚的纱布。

钱晓强
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Posted: 2013-04-08 01:25:25 Post subject:

建议再读《凡高传》。 _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

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Posted: 2013-04-08 08:46:59 Post subject:

钱晓强 wrote:

建议再读《凡高传》。

不用读了，梵高的耳朵是为情割掉的。
我这里联想到这么一段，是表达了与他相同的处境。

可能有人纠结于耳朵是被割掉的，而我这里描写成受伤，这点我早已点意识到，但我固执这么做。耳朵割了，但里面的部分呢？耳朵的功能还有啊，还能听啊。鉴于此，说成受伤。。。这么深入钻。没有意义。

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Posted: 2013-04-08 09:28:04 Post subject:

“受够了这一切。疯狂的把插座切掉， ” 插座！有趣。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-08 10:34:13 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“受够了这一切。疯狂的
把插座切掉， ”
插座！有趣。

姚阳辉
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Posted: 2013-04-08 20:57:17 Post subject:

如同殇爱了的男女，极力的去挽救爱情，结果，是布满冰冷的盔甲的火车，对开相向呼啸而去。

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-04-08 21:09:28 Post subject:

提读。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2013-04-08 22:18:07 Post subject:

姚阳辉 wrote:

如同殇爱了的男女，
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Posted: 2013-04-08 22:19:25 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

提读。

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