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欲望的声音（外二首）

如云飞过
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Posted: 2013-04-04 20:32:03 Post subject: 欲望的声音（外二首）

欲望的声音文如云飞过看一眼，夜便失控你是否就是隋唐后宫，那年失窃的梅瓶光洁醉人的釉色足以造成一场千年不遇的交通阻塞看一眼，定力溃败不堪在你与佛之间这算不上邪念无需将欲按进深水更不会造成一次该或不该的犯罪你值得小心翼翼世代收藏记忆的沙漏在沉寂的往事里，酝酿一场沙的狂欢那些细碎的精灵，沿风的肋骨一路咆哮，南下澎湃的热情，来不及逃亡便被层层掩埋时间的漏口，将期待的心跳凝滞在你到来的瞬间我用半生堆砌的堡垒分崩离析三月的乡下三月，向城里人甩出一个鲜亮的字眼万绿是一种超脱想象的惊艳三星两点的红是涂抹在村庄腮旁的胭脂小河边、老屋后，千百颗尖尖的脑袋齐心协力顶破春泥三月，未曾邂逅一场淅沥的小雨思念却不逊于深秋一切，都在为即将开始的一幕时节做着铺垫而成片成片的花黄，以及零零落落的纸钱把一些新旧坟头映衬的更加显眼

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Posted: 2013-04-05 10:13:01 Post subject:

“三月，向城里人甩出一个鲜亮的字眼万绿是一种超脱想象的惊艳 ” _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-05 10:23:41 Post subject:

含蓄，慢慢的品味。

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Posted: 2013-04-05 11:41:54 Post subject:

提一下。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2013-04-06 21:35:23 Post subject:

三月，未曾邂逅一场淅沥的小雨思念却不逊于深秋喜歡此句問好

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Posted: 2013-04-08 01:29:51 Post subject:

看一眼，夜便失控你是否就是隋唐后宫，那年失窃的梅瓶光洁醉人的釉色足以造成一场千年不遇的交通阻塞 _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

如云飞过
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Posted: 2013-04-08 20:44:04 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“三月，向城里人甩出一个鲜亮的字眼
万绿是一种超脱想象的惊艳 ”

谢谢，问好！

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Posted: 2013-04-08 20:44:25 Post subject:

陇上雪 wrote:

含蓄，慢慢的品味。

谢谢，问好！

如云飞过
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Posted: 2013-04-08 20:44:54 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

提一下。

谢谢，问候你！

如云飞过
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Posted: 2013-04-08 20:45:19 Post subject:

戀海 wrote:

三月，未曾邂逅一场淅沥的小雨
思念却不逊于深秋

喜歡此句

問好

谢谢，问候你！

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Posted: 2013-04-08 20:45:50 Post subject:

钱晓强 wrote:

看一眼，夜便失控
...

谢谢，，，问好！！！

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Posted: 2013-04-08 20:56:21 Post subject:

在沉寂的往事里，酝酿一场沙的狂欢那些细碎的精灵，沿风的肋骨一路咆哮，南下澎湃的热情，来不及逃亡便被层层掩埋时间的漏口，将期待的心跳凝滞在你到来的瞬间我用半生堆砌的堡垒分崩离析

如云飞过
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Posted: 2013-04-16 22:42:54 Post subject:

姚阳辉 wrote:

在沉寂的往事里，酝酿
...

问好！

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