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<禅,非禅>
风动
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 10:33:36    Post subject: <禅,非禅> Reply with quote

<禅>
让人厌烦的一盏 
黑灯
晃来晃去

如眼中沙
风中影

象多嘴的木鱼
将梦敲醒

<非禅>
让人厌烦的一盏 
黑灯
晃来晃去

如眼中沙
风中影

象多嘴的木鱼
将梦敲醒

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博弈
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 10:48:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

這個恰適合風動的筆名,
也有點"中觀"體悟.

我來和一個:

幡趾高氣昂地說:
風, 你別動!
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风墙
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 10:50:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

慢慢咀嚼,有味!
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风动
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:04:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个,不好回答。开口-心动,不开口-心也动了。自生自灭吧。 Smile
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:15:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

佛,亦非佛。
——问好风动!!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:19:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

否定之否定
还是别醒的好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:33:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢风墙,问好!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:35:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
佛,亦非佛。
——问好风动!!


呵呵,“佛”,也是一盏黑灯。问好老师!
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:35:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

风中影
——这个比喻好,黑灯不是我的感觉。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:35:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
否定之否定
还是别醒的好 Very Happy


梦中了了醉中醒啊。周末好! Smile
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 11:40:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
风中影
——这个比喻好,黑灯不是我的感觉。


无灯自在。问好冲浪!
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 13:08:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

象多嘴的木鱼
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 15:20:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象、精练,很有味道。问好风动版主。
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游戏诗歌
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 18:03:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

没有了
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 21:06:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好风动老师!黑夜很快就要过去!
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张洁
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PostPosted: 2013-04-06 17:10:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

耐品~张洁学习~
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PostPosted: 2013-04-11 09:17:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

一一谢谢楼上各位,周末问好! Smile
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四毛
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PostPosted: 2013-04-12 20:35:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy 禅 和 非禅 都是意义的无限可能性。
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