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Posted: 2007-04-22 17:57:23 Post subject: 满庭芳.与佛语

夜夜经抄，年年斋戒，何来懊恼重重。凭阑悄思，且许问东风。若说菩提能渡，又怎个、不渡从容？一声叹，禅机无解，言句未由衷。那时还照影，身如春柳，心似秋桐。漫留得、芳魂非在非空。此意谁堪共语，闲愁付、累了飞鸿。拈香处，合十暗祈，但梦与君同。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-04-22 18:41:21 Post subject: Re: 满庭芳.与佛语

暗香如沁 wrote:

夜夜经抄，年年斋戒，何来懊恼重重。
凭阑悄思，且许问东风。
若说菩提能渡，又怎个、不渡从容？
一声叹，禅机无解，言句未由衷。

那时还照影，身如春柳，心似秋桐。
漫留得、芳魂非在非空。
此意谁堪共语，闲愁付、累了飞鸿。
拈香处，合十暗祈，但梦与君同。

诗意禅意能达此境，不多也，拜读了。

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Posted: 2007-04-22 19:10:59 Post subject:

好诗词，好意境。虽然不拜佛不懂词，但是读起来令人回味无穷。上半篇描出一虔诚的信徒急于功成。下半篇则还原其凡心犹在，红尘依恋的情怀。可谓“禅机岂无解，只渡有缘人”。看来学成什么都不容易啊。

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Posted: 2007-04-23 17:24:26 Post subject:

暗香好词, 近日事太杂, 难以静心相和, 汗

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他乡客 wrote:

好诗词，好意境。虽然不拜佛不懂词，但是读起来令人回味无穷。上半篇描出一虔诚的信徒急于功成。下半篇则还原其凡心犹在，红尘依恋的情怀。可谓“禅机岂无解，只渡有缘人”。看来学成什么都不容易啊。 Wink

问好他乡客～～～暗香惭愧．无奈难离红尘。
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Posted: 2007-04-24 05:08:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

暗香好词, 近日事太杂, 难以静心相和, 汗

暗香最近也是惭愧．俗事也多．总是是是非非．来得少了．你好吗？
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Posted: 2007-04-24 06:31:16 Post subject:

工巧、新奇、蕴藉。看来非一日所得，学习！

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Posted: 2007-04-24 19:13:53 Post subject:

很细腻，很感人。

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Posted: 2007-04-25 00:31:20 Post subject:

欲渡从容，先去从容。哈哈，捣乱了。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-04-25 07:43:55 Post subject:

字字珠玑，好词。

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Posted: 2007-05-02 00:57:41 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

工巧、新奇、蕴藉。
看来非一日所得，学习！

谢谢冰清赏读。问好
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Posted: 2007-05-02 00:58:51 Post subject:

fade wrote:

很细腻，很感人。

一时感慨。君见笑了。
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Posted: 2007-05-02 00:59:49 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

欲渡从容，先去从容。哈哈，捣乱了。

非捣乱。是一语点醒梦中人。
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Posted: 2007-05-02 01:00:36 Post subject:

恒石 wrote:

字字珠玑，好词。

问好恒石。欢迎多来古韵交流
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Posted: 2007-05-02 03:46:48 Post subject: Re: 满庭芳.与佛语

暗香如沁 wrote:

读了好几遍，真是句句好句啊，美哉，收藏了，时时读读。

“身如春柳，心似秋桐”！

“芳魂非在非空”！

拈得好句。

后来碰巧查到，居然以前曾经存有你的博客地址。想不知什么时候，曾交会过也未可知，或同习文，或同思本，

因缘真的难说。

多谢好词。

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Posted: 2007-05-03 06:41:59 Post subject:

缘字难说。再相遇只为暗香之幸。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-05-03 16:09:26 Post subject:

阿弥佗佛！ _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

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Posted: 2007-05-03 19:18:47 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

缘字难说。再相遇只为暗香之幸。

佛缘,问好

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Posted: 2007-05-03 20:54:56 Post subject:

合十暗祈，南无！但梦与君同，阿弥佗佛！

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Posted: 2007-05-04 02:47:24 Post subject:

冷巉 wrote:

阿弥佗佛！

早有一面之缘，问君安好？
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