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每月双语一诗 (2013.4)
非马
秀才


zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-06-22
tièzǐ: 907
láizì: 芝加哥
非马běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2013-04-03 10:45:49    fābiǎozhùtí: 每月双语一诗 (2013.4) yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

积木游戏

就在这片
心的废墟上
他们曾亲手
用坚实多彩的
方块
搭建起一座
巍峨辉煌的神庙

至於它後来
究竟是被一只玩厌了的手
轻率无聊地一下子推倒
或因其中一个负重的方块
禁不起风风雨雨的侵蚀
而颓然塌陷
年代久远
已湮灭不可辨析



THE GAME OF BLOCKS


It was right here

on this ruin of hearts

they built with their own hands

using sturdy colorful blocks

a magnificent lofty temple



As to what happened later

whether it was carelessly pushed over

by a bored hand

or one of the blocks

was so eroded by the elements

that it crumbled under its weight...

since it was such a long time ago

nobody could really tell



(中文版被收入《蚱蜢世界》─《非马新诗自选集》第三卷(1990-1999) ,秀威资讯,台北,2012.7;英文版被收入 BETWEEN HEAVEN AND EARTH ,PublishAmerica, Baltimore,2010
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白水
大学士


zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-10-02
tièzǐ: 14102
láizì: TORONTO
白水běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2013-04-03 22:37:05    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

thanks for sharing
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Lake
举人


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tièzǐ: 1286

Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2013-04-05 02:38:17    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

Good metaphor. I was trying to figure out what it was referred to. Of course it can be alluded to diferent things by different readers which is a plus in poetry. One thing brings to mind is that nothing can be built strong on "心的废墟上".

Enjoyed.

Lake
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非马běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2013-04-05 03:40:40    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

白水 Moonlight xièdào:
thanks for sharing

问好
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非马
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tièzǐ: 907
láizì: 芝加哥
非马běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2013-04-05 03:42:06    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

Lake xièdào:
Good metaphor. I was trying to figure out what it was referred to. Of course it can be alluded to diferent things by different readers which is a plus in poetry. One thing brings to mind is that nothing can be built strong on "心的废墟上".
...
LAKE好! Thanks for your good interpretation.
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