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夜色

谭剑飞
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Posted: 2013-04-02 00:28:11 Post subject: 夜色

夜，好安静。我听到了我的呼吸。与大地悄悄搀扶走过。偶尔的，瘦削的自行车。—— 耳朵的涟漪。—— 携着清风，在眼睛里悠悠，淡入夜幕。从红色的天那边，一对情侣，披黑，走到了看不见，红色的天那边。汽车呼呼。过年了，对面的窗，没有再亮过.... 夜，深了。自行车没了，情侣没了。汽车，更快了。 2013.04.01

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-04-02 07:49:51 Post subject:

好像情景剧。标题《夜色中》？ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

谭剑飞
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Posted: 2013-04-02 10:07:22 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

好像情景剧。标题《夜色中》？

不能沉湎于“中”，最后还得跳出情景，纵观全局，引发思考。谓之由外及里，由内而外。 Smile

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