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At Age 76
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 00:34:17    Post subject: At Age 76 Reply with quote

At Age 76

Beijing Tokyo Minneapolis /St Paul.

She tunnels through currents and clouds,
transported to this imagined land with
all she can utter - hello, yes, no, I’m sorry...

We both know what this trip means,
we do know, but we don’t say it.

We spend our best time at Cub Foods;
she holds me back at a pedestrian crossing
as the driver waves your right-of-way.

She smiles to kids in shopping carts,
smiles when a puppy barks around,
smiles at the neighbor’s friendly greetings

and nervously replies:
sorry, wǒ bù dǒng yīng yǔ .
(I don’t know English)

You’ve seen how someone deftly moves
the beads on an abacus up and down.
Such is the way her mind works at numbers,

converting from $ to ¥ or vice versa
so easily. I give her more maths to do and
wonder if I will be able to do the same.
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 20:33:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

描写很真实,生动。 欣赏。。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-03 10:44:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

A lovely poem, indeed.
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PostPosted: 2013-04-03 22:29:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy How lovely grandma
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 02:28:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you Sliu, Mr Fei Ma and Moonlight for the lovely comments.

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PostPosted: 2013-06-25 23:18:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

good.
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PostPosted: 2013-06-27 03:50:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Mark. You know what, this "good" one received -0.9 from Poetry Assessor Very Happy

Another one of mine which I don't think highly of, not mentioning its name, received 7.8 Surprised

http://www.poetryassessor.com/poetry/
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PostPosted: 2013-06-27 04:30:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lake wrote:
Thanks Mark. You know what, this "good" one received -0.9 from Poetry Assessor Very Happy
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I don't give 'good' casually, it s GOOD, it means beyond words, but not yet away from normal poetics.

I like it.
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