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				|  Posted: 2013-04-01 00:34:17    Post subject: At Age 76 |   |  
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				| At Age 76 
 Beijing Tokyo Minneapolis /St Paul.
 
 She tunnels through currents and clouds,
 transported to this imagined land with
 all she can utter - hello, yes, no, I’m sorry...
 
 We both know what this trip means,
 we do know, but we don’t say it.
 
 We spend our best time at Cub Foods;
 she holds me back at a pedestrian crossing
 as the driver waves your right-of-way.
 
 She smiles to kids in shopping carts,
 smiles when a puppy barks around,
 smiles at the neighbor’s friendly greetings
 
 and nervously replies:
 sorry, wǒ bù dǒng yīng yǔ .
 (I don’t know English)
 
 You’ve seen how someone deftly moves
 the beads on an abacus up and down.
 Such is the way her mind works at numbers,
 
 converting from $ to ¥ or vice versa
 so easily. I give her more maths to do and
 wonder if I will be able to do the same.
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 the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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		| SLIU 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-01 20:33:29    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 描写很真实,生动。 欣赏。。 |  | 
	
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		| 非马 秀才
 
 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-03 22:29:23    Post subject: |   |  
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				|  How lovely grandma |  | 
	
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		| Lake 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-05 02:28:44    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Thank you Sliu, Mr Fei Ma and Moonlight for the lovely comments. 
 Lake
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 the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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		| 博弈 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2013-06-25 23:18:44    Post subject: |   |  
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				| good. _________________
 (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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		| Lake 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2013-06-27 03:50:15    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Thanks Mark. You know what, this "good" one received -0.9 from Poetry Assessor   
 Another one of mine which I don't think highly of, not mentioning its name, received 7.8
   
 http://www.poetryassessor.com/poetry/
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				|  Posted: 2013-06-27 04:30:08    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | Thanks Mark. You know what, this "good" one received -0.9 from Poetry Assessor   ...
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 I don't give 'good' casually, it s GOOD, it means beyond words, but not yet away from normal poetics.
 
 I like it.
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 (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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