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鹧鸪天--江南仲春和白云老师
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 20:29:45    Post subject: 鹧鸪天--江南仲春和白云老师 Reply with quote

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白云老师写的是加国的初春景象,临屏依韵和一首--江南仲春
柳绿桃红暖意柔,
清明前后踏春游。
眼帘映入群芳色,
笔下描来艳彩舟。
童戏戏,
鸟啾啾。
放飞鹞子出高楼。
阳光普洒人间物,
还少灵蜂相片留。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 23:29:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

江南仲春景色柔,欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 23:46:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊唱和!好一幅生动活泼的明媚春色画卷!
笑聊可否详釋一下结句的〝还少灵蜂〞的含意,以助加深体会学习,謝謝!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2013-03-31 07:11:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
謝謝笑聊唱和!好一幅生动活泼的明媚春色画卷!
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早春刚过,仲春初期,天气咋暖还凉,蜂蝶繁忙之境少见,故有此说。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-31 20:27:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
江南仲春景色柔,欣赏!


问候黄老师安好!
谢谢黄老欣赏鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-31 23:48:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊详释!加深理解。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-01 11:58:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好兄长!前来学习!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-02 06:03:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

江南春浓,诗画交融。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-05 01:38:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

阳光普洒人间物,
还少灵蜂相片留。


哈,“结”出了奇趣!喜欢。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-07 20:16:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷雨 wrote:
问好兄长!前来学习!


谢谢冷兄赏读鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-07 20:18:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
江南春浓,诗画交融。


问候庆宏兄!谢谢点评鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-07 20:19:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
阳光普洒人间物,
还少灵蜂相片留。


哈,“结”出了奇趣!喜欢。


问好!谢谢冰清老师点评鼓励!
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