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我喜欢这世界
绿玉
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Joined: 28 Feb 2013
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 10:12:52    Post subject: 我喜欢这世界 Reply with quote
我喜欢这世界
我喜欢这静
这时候的人都睡了
没有战斗
没有纷争
只有温馨甜蜜的梦
我喜欢这世界
我喜欢这时分
没有嘈杂的舌头
没有嫉妒的眼睛
没有仇恨的心
最狠恶的人
睡着了
也许都会做善良的梦
我喜欢这世界
这个时分
没有上下层次
没有高低区分
没有鄙视的目光
没有巴结的眼神
不分穷富
不论身份
睡下了
都是一个姿势
做梦权利人人平等
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山城子
榜眼


Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 10:22:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错，可以分三节。
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 11:32:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
善良的梦
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绿玉
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 18:32:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
山城子 wrote:
不错，可以分三节。


呵呵，你这老师太认真，你要稍微不认真一点，你就会年轻五十岁。谢谢老师指导，问好！
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绿玉
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PostPosted: 2013-03-30 18:43:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
善良的梦


是一个善良的梦，恰如其反。问好白水老师！
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