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科技公務員
楓人苑
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PostPosted: 2013-03-27 02:36:53    Post subject: 科技公務員 Reply with quote

科技公務員

下班回家
經過一個車庫
開啟的門正停著
仍可以聽見馬達鍊條的聲音
女主人拉著她頑固的老狗
反作用力不肯出門

轉彎後
我算算再隔 
三次窗的顏色退去
+兩次廚房裝修
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我也可以退休了

屆時
硬殼才真正是屬於寄居蟹的
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2013-03-27 10:34:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

屆時
硬殼才真正是屬於寄居蟹的

哈哈——有意思!!
——问好了!!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 00:42:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

朝九晚五日子千篇一律
海外華人工程師
很多就如寄居蟹
老來享受房子
似乎一輩子就為了房子
老來反而不願出門了
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枫桥夜泊
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 08:14:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读。不过第二节中似应为省略号吧……
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 09:54:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

枫桥夜泊 wrote:
拜读。不过第二节中似应为省略号吧……


是一條線
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原先無法顯現出來,例如

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+ 2
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PostPosted: 2013-03-28 15:31:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

其实很有意趣,可以多读几次~!
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