岷江一苇
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 Posted: 2013-03-26 23:39:56 Post subject: 帝王 |
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其实是一高档休闲会所之名
只要你足够流氓或足够斯文
有足够的权力签单
或有足够的现金
便可过一把帝王之瘾 |
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山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
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| Posted: 2013-03-27 10:31:34 Post subject: |
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很客观的叙述！！
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金金
进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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岷江一苇
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Location: 中国四川犍为
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| Posted: 2013-03-28 17:08:26 Post subject: |
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| 有闹着玩的存在，就有闹着玩的诗。有人说过“诗即废话”。 |
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山城子
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| Posted: 2013-03-28 22:18:12 Post subject: |
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金金的意思，可能是觉得写的还应具体严肃一些，毕竟是属于严肃的题材。
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岷江一苇
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| Posted: 2013-03-28 23:17:31 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢山城老师！我知道金金的意思。我想用一种嬉谐的语言，直抵存在的丑恶。也许能力不够，表达总不尽人意。 |
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