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hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-12 13:36:08 Post subject:

用了近10天的时间，终于完成组诗《诗人游记》的创作。行文力求做到：真诚，真实，自然，新颖，这八个字。诗歌，建立于意象之上，适度的夸张是必须的，但夸张也需要是自然的。那如何做到自然的夸张呢，如何把握这个度呢？以《8、寻隐者不遇》为例，我三易其稿，目的只有一个：如何自然地演绎古诗词呢？那株松是天然而成的，经历了唐朝到现在的，一千多年的风风雨雨，成为中国诗歌的经典，那它移植到我的诗歌里，是否还保留有那份自然的美感呢？ _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-12 13:48:23 Post subject:

那个童子是天真浪漫的，到了我的诗里，是否还留有那份无邪的音容样貌呢？记起《大长今》里女主角的一句台词：做饮食需要一份真诚。写诗歌，要外加一份自然。食材是天然长成的，所以，做饮食只需不要刻意破坏，另加一份真诚，美味佳肴就顺其自然地烹调出来了。但文字，本身只是意象和事物的抽象符号，是非自然的人工制品，如何用人为的东西，来表达自然的世界万物呢？这需要多一倍的真诚的心力的注入，才能更好地反映出我们周围的社会，生活，和环境。 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2013-03-13 01:49:39 Post subject:

终于写完了.思绪万千,杨扬洒洒,谈古论今,最后,,,,,,,置于死地而后生or not?

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-13 02:16:48 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

终于写完了.思绪万千,杨扬洒洒,谈古论今,最后,,,,,,,置于死地而后生or not?

死亡是现代诗歌的主题
Laughing

张义和
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Posted: 2013-03-14 12:46:20 Post subject:

而我，只不过是一瓣消散中的雪的魂魄，

吴端择
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Posted: 2013-03-15 21:43:06 Post subject:

既然手握一支空灵的笔，就不要用它写实了吧个人觉得，第一首非常扎眼，就像是一个优秀的芭蕾舞者偏偏选了一把轮椅做了道具！ _________________ 爱情不是钟摆。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-16 00:29:30 Post subject:

感谢张义和与吴端择的点评 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-16 06:48:44 Post subject:

那么丰富啊.看到您和洛夫先生亲密的情谊。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

SLIU
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Posted: 2013-03-16 12:16:10 Post subject:

a movie in two languages, Chinese and "Greek"

上城
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Posted: 2013-03-26 00:35:07 Post subject:

每个时代都应有其精神领袖 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

囚肉
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Posted: 2013-03-26 09:22:52 Post subject:

也来学习。 _________________ 通联：中国江苏省溧阳市周城中学李金保邮编：213342

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