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《本色书写》(三首)
杨华之
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PostPosted: 2013-03-24 14:52:08    Post subject: 《本色书写》(三首) Reply with quote

《本色书写》(三首)

诗 / 杨华之

《东江渔船》

重返最初的本真,做一个
纯粹的名词:在薄雾的清晨,它想
打开梦中的平常一景——

缓慢是基调。双桨划起的节拍
为两岸芦苇荡中野鸭的歌吟
唱出完美的和声

漫无目的……仍有鱼可捕
有鸬鹚立于船头
有竹编船篷可以藏身

快速是致命的。那喘息,那惊悸
使一个梦提前结束。使一个词
无奈中变异。你看

雾散了。马达声响起。河水开始涌动
它已回归现实:捞江螺,淘沙子
成为一个虚幻的代词


《木棉,木棉》

它击中了我,以一树
耀眼的红。我已迈不开脚步
也摸不到,具体的伤口

作为此次事件的始作俑者
绿,具有不可推卸的责任。此刻
它暂居幕后,伺机而动

我不知要等多久,才能
让另一场声势浩大的白色浪漫——
那燃烧后的果核,吐出的

睛空飞雪,为我带来清凉。只是
一株木棉轮回反复的
彩色陷阱,随时可能让我深陷其中

这不,我已不能自拔于这个
完美的比喻:一树火焰,在北丫桥头
在四月,将我灼伤


《香樟,香樟》

这不是奇迹。当我靠近
或不靠近,月光下这一株浓荫
胜过所有绿色的修辞

旺盛和执着并存。此刻冬季
它把凋零藏在哪里
春天、夏天,还是秋天?

这一把承接月光碎银的大伞,不仅
承接风,承接雨
承接时光雕刻的所有无情

更有流动的暗香
来自于哪一根枝条,哪一经叶脉
莫不是月中桂树乘梦下凡?

……哦,这不是梦。这只是
现实一种:被忽略的美,不需要抒情
只需要本色书写

()作者通联:523187 中国广东省 东莞市 道教镇明海公司
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邹治海
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PostPosted: 2013-03-24 16:03:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

你这个组诗 劲道 有味 学习了
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张义和
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PostPosted: 2013-03-24 19:10:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

月光下这一株浓荫
胜过所有绿色的修辞
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杨华之
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 16:14:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

邹治海 wrote:
你这个组诗 劲道 有味 学习了

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谢邹治海点评。
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远狼
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PostPosted: 2013-03-25 16:56:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

致美的东西有些候很骗人!

这三首不知是不是一蹴而就?如果是,感觉到第三首势有些弱了,完成得有点勉强。
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