黄磊
童生
Joined: 02 Mar 2013
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Location: 中国 安徽
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 Posted: 2013-03-18 16:51:06 Post subject: 春日感怀二首 |
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韶华已是去年春，俱散天涯今作尘。
只恨东风偏我意，多情不向有情人。
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清池孤影数芳华，对对葇荑无落差，
俯首春心何处是，萧萧日暮又天涯。 |
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黄磊
童生
Joined: 02 Mar 2013
Posts: 31
Location: 中国 安徽
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| Posted: 2013-03-23 10:49:48 Post subject: |
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| 提读 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2013-03-23 19:06:12 Post subject: |
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| 有“落花流水春何在”之感慨。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2013-03-23 19:44:42 Post subject: |
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| 有李后主的词味。 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2013-03-23 23:40:06 Post subject: |
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春日感怀情意浓，诗隨景生詞味丰！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄磊
童生
Joined: 02 Mar 2013
Posts: 31
Location: 中国 安徽
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| Posted: 2013-03-24 13:41:48 Post subject: |
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| 多谢各位老师雅赏，问好 |
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冷雨
秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010
Posts: 439
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| Posted: 2013-03-28 16:14:19 Post subject: |
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| 问好诗友！学习，欣赏！ |
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黄磊
童生
Joined: 02 Mar 2013
Posts: 31
Location: 中国 安徽
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| Posted: 2013-03-31 12:10:10 Post subject: |
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| 多谢雅赏。问好 |
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