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桥（外一首）

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Posted: 2013-03-18 10:44:49 Post subject: 桥（外一首）

桥（外一首） □中国重庆特父这河上摆放的物件承载过往骑水于跨下通达春秋任岁月慢慢流逝风雨担当如若摆放心上心境自然敞亮卤那些肉身在药里熬炼滋味出自时间的针灸原有的腥原有的腻被药水掺和口味服众一个过程一个改变肉身的过程一个肉身改变的过程

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Posted: 2013-03-18 19:26:56 Post subject:

一个过程一个改变肉身的过程一个肉身改变的过程 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2013-03-20 14:38:58 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

一个过程
一个改变肉身的过程
一个肉身改变的过程

问好！多批!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-20 22:36:40 Post subject:

喜欢第二首。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2013-03-21 00:56:32 Post subject:

理性之作

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Posted: 2013-03-21 11:14:55 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

喜欢第二首。

问安！

特父
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Posted: 2013-03-21 11:15:21 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

理性之作

沏茶！多批！

远狼
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Posted: 2013-03-21 13:03:57 Post subject:

桥的最后两行有煞风景之嫌。不过两首都喜欢，有重庆风味！ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-03-21 21:45:50 Post subject:

喜欢这样的哲理诗。一桥达多地风景，一药治多人之心。

浪花依旧
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Posted: 2013-03-21 23:34:44 Post subject:

我也两首都喜欢 _________________ 生命原本是永恒的弹唱可我不想只弹唱一首歌曲我只想去创造美妙的曲调让自己弹唱也让别人弹唱

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Posted: 2013-03-22 20:13:26 Post subject:

远狼 wrote:

桥的最后两行有煞风景之嫌。不过两首都喜欢，有重庆风味！

问好！谢评正！

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Posted: 2013-03-22 20:14:12 Post subject:

YGHXS wrote:

喜欢这样的哲理诗。

一桥达多地风景，一药治多人之心。

周末快乐！

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Posted: 2013-03-22 20:14:47 Post subject:

浪花依旧 wrote:

我也两首都喜欢

问安！多批！

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