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面对一粒种子

晓曲
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Posted: 2013-02-13 09:11:35 Post subject: 面对一粒种子

面对一粒种子文/晓曲总是在一双长着厚茧的手里感受温暖，等待来年发芽出肩挑背磨的感恩或在一只小鸟细细的嘴尖忍受疼痛，伴随飞翔一声鸣唱后选择落地生根抑或紧跟风的脚步起舞随冷暖漂洋过海翻山越岭自由地坠落面朝：大海，滩涂，荒漠面朝：山崖，峭壁，沟壑面朝一无所有无论在哪儿，以何种方式因为内心饱含激情与渴望总有一片春天在等候 2013-2-11

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-02-13 17:17:38 Post subject:

无论在哪儿，以何种方式因为内心包含激情与渴望总有一片春天在等候问好。祝福新年，万事如意。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

晓曲
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Posted: 2013-02-13 22:52:11 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

无论在哪儿，以何种方式
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谢谢朋友的赏阅与祝福，新年好！

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-15 14:03:10 Post subject:

深情，诗意

晓曲
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Posted: 2013-02-15 19:22:56 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

深情，诗意

谢谢白水老师评读！

晓曲
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Posted: 2013-03-21 16:46:06 Post subject:

谢谢大家关注，交流共进！

四毛
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Posted: 2013-03-21 17:32:28 Post subject:

面朝：大海，滩涂，荒漠面朝：山崖，峭壁，沟壑面朝一无所有很美的体验。 _________________ 情绪是我说话的唯一方式

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Posted: 2013-03-21 21:32:04 Post subject:

前部份比较厚重，后部份就轻了。

晓曲
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Posted: 2013-03-22 18:43:27 Post subject:

四毛 wrote:

面朝：大海，滩涂，荒漠
...

谢谢朋友阅评！

晓曲
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Posted: 2013-03-22 18:44:03 Post subject:

YGHXS wrote:

前部份比较厚重，后部份就轻了。

谢谢朋友指正！

宝塔山人
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Posted: 2013-03-22 18:58:21 Post subject:

因为内心包含激情和渴望，总有一片春天在等候！诗意浓浓！

晓曲
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Posted: 2013-03-22 21:22:30 Post subject:

宝塔山人 wrote:

因为内心包含激情和渴望，总有一片春天在等候！诗意浓浓！

谢谢朋友阅评鼓励！

更正，才发现饱含，笔误为包含了，我本意是用饱含。欢迎大家指正！

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