楓人苑 秀才

Joined: 10 Mar 2013 Posts: 197
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Posted: 2013-03-10 11:11:10 Post subject: 深雲古寺鐘 |
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深雲古寺鐘
此地無雪
十二月
石板道上
苔砌的腳印
一個一個
向往鐘樓
禿樹守著院落
而窗格言謹
天色漸冷
之中──
吁吁前來的雲靄
可是意欲投宿的
香客傍晚
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2013-03-10 11:21:48 Post subject: |
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古意十足
我正在写《寻隐者不遇》
 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-13 06:59:12 Post subject: |
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现代人梦进古人的意境。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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枫桥夜泊 童生
Joined: 18 Mar 2013 Posts: 45
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Posted: 2013-03-20 08:51:01 Post subject: |
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挺有意境的 _________________ 诗歌可以使人理性,时时不忘作人良知。 |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-21 02:38:08 Post subject: |
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問好. _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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楓人苑 秀才

Joined: 10 Mar 2013 Posts: 197
楓人苑Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-21 03:18:48 Post subject: |
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白雪香
冰弦琵琶
瓦當滴漏
煙籠籬笆
蒸蒸兹舞
小路如魚
浮出冰面
春如揚琴
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守墓人笔记 童生
Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 12 Location: 中国广州 守墓人笔记Collection |
Posted: 2013-03-21 09:04:13 Post subject: |
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短诗什么的精炼又有爱 |
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