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【一个人其一】

吴端择
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Joined: 15 Jan 2009
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Location: 郑州
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Posted: 2013-03-18 14:51:38 Post subject: 【一个人其一】

【一个人其一】　　一个人，坐于窗前。听檐下的秋雨，听墙上的古钟…… 　　一个人，漫步林间。数飘落的红叶，数鲜活的生命…… _________________ 爱情不是钟摆。

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Location: 中国贵州
山城子Collection

Posted: 2013-03-19 00:30:56 Post subject:

两节两种意境，不协调。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

远狼
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Joined: 04 Nov 2012
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Posted: 2013-03-19 09:39:24 Post subject:

两个情景，可以处理成一个实一个虚，用一个承接将实景转移到虚景 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

吴端择
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Joined: 15 Jan 2009
Posts: 57
Location: 郑州
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Posted: 2013-03-19 17:45:28 Post subject:

问好山城、远狼！ _________________ 爱情不是钟摆。

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