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幻梦
吴端择
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PostPosted: 2013-03-15 14:08:50    Post subject: 幻梦 Reply with quote

不必要粉饰太平
我发觉脚下每一步
都是剑拔弩张的冲突
我屏息游走,时刻持刃在手
那些经过我的长发窈窕
虽一个个眼含秋色
却断然不啻嗜血的母豹。

静湖无波,唯斜阳润色
我一身漆黑劲服
背倚一棵擎天古树
此时,将夜的风几欲醉人
我不由心中惕然
遂轻轻一跃,隐入高耸广茂的树身
复一腾挪
即寻着一处憩息的场所
继而探听八方
确认无虞了方才安然入眠
一觉到天亮。

竟不知何时醒来!
更不知何时离开!
静湖依旧
古树依旧
只多了一架秋千,几许扁舟
而之前的窈窕长发
或悠游湖间或荡身树下
她们的衣衫更是炫目的白!
我则倦卧湖边赤足戏水
偶一举目,便入定了似的
被一汪幻梦般的蓝色迷住
最后,我终不为周围异景左右
只是望天,只是望天
直到形神俱散。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 00:34:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

几分倜傥,几分古典,几分空灵,幻想独到
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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 09:44:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

现实与梦幻的交错
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吴端择
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 14:10:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好和平岛,问好白水。
整篇有着不知所云的味道,且当是梦语吧
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四毛
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PostPosted: 2013-03-17 12:20:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

江湖、隐士、最后遁化。Very Happy 不能执迷,只能具散。
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吴端择
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PostPosted: 2013-03-17 15:30:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

就是一江湖梦而已,哈
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PostPosted: 2013-03-17 21:37:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

吴端择 wrote:
就是一江湖梦而已,哈


Very Happy 那似有似无似像不像大概称着意绪,说出来模棱两可还不如沉默的东西也是存在的,不过江湖何其大,何其宽也。~ ~
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PostPosted: 2013-03-18 00:36:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

怎么也算是一个武侠迷啊,权当告慰吧。
记得几年前还冒出过写一本武侠主题的诗集的念头呢,呵
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