影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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 Posted: 2013-03-15 19:48:53 Post subject: 七律•谁系风筝客依韵田野风兄 |
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七律•谁系风筝客依韵田野风兄
苦柳轻摇月上窗，捧书独对夜漫长。
诗文不厌风筝客，手眼还留尘世霜。
寂寞归来藏雨恨，青春飞逝想云狂。
谁知一线天堂远，煮梦疗饥真故乡。
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2013-03-15 20:01:03 Post subject: |
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寂寞归来藏雨恨，青春飞逝想云狂。
颈联特别激赏！ |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2013-03-16 08:56:40 Post subject: |
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与笑聊兄同感，此联甚佳！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2013-03-16 09:34:06 Post subject: |
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煮梦疗饥
很有意思！ |
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影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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| Posted: 2013-03-16 18:41:00 Post subject: |
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三位周末好啊
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2013-03-17 21:17:08 Post subject: |
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诗文不厌风筝客，手眼还留尘世霜。
形象，内涵 |
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