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PostPosted: 2013-03-15 14:07:31    Post subject: 山居 Reply with quote
你听那檐后的秋雨
叮咚不绝的滴落
你听那墙角的竹叶
沙沙如织的摩挲
嘘！亲爱的，
这才是最宁馨最动人的时刻！

亲爱的，让我执你柔荑
秉持一把小伞
推门、轻脚步出小院
踩着曲折的小石径
乘夜色走上新雨后的空山
亲爱的，你听！
是什么鸟儿还在发出一声声翠鸣？
亲爱的，你看！
那灯火微微的可是我们家的小院？

哦，亲爱的，快来我怀里
让我们相拥着，共呼吸一次
这众芳的清新和大山的静谧
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 00:40:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
共呼吸一次

这众芳的清新和大山的静谧

还好
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PostPosted: 2013-03-16 14:19:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
是否还有不妥之处？请前辈直言……
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