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窗前的枝头
北美一郎
童生


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PostPosted: 2013-03-14 00:13:46    Post subject: 窗前的枝头 Reply with quote

窗前的枝头

打满了苞蕾

青青的枝条

充满了一片春天的活力

传递着春的信息
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山城子
榜眼


Joined: 23 May 2007
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Location: 中国贵州
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PostPosted: 2013-03-14 13:32:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

染绿了叶子   
染绿了枝干
  
染绿了叶  
染绿了枝——但干,一般和冬天没区别的吧?
  
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北美一郎
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PostPosted: 2013-03-14 21:25:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
染绿了叶子   
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李老师您不喜欢那首,我现在为你换了一首,谢谢您一次次指导!
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