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桃花

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-07 14:51:40 Post subject: 桃花

桃花桃园郎燕剪春风枝上浓，但瞧彩蝶舞西东。谁家小女歌声烈，唱得山村遍地红。 _________________ 诗词艺苑欢迎你！百度“诗词艺苑”即可找到网址。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-07 15:00:51 Post subject:

燕剪春风好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-03-07 20:09:25 Post subject:

欢迎新朋友！燕剪春风枝上浓，但瞧彩蝶舞西东。谁家小女歌声烈，唱得山村遍地红。好诗！春意浓浓。

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-07 20:12:43 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

燕剪春风

好

感谢朋友来读并给予点评！
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桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-07 20:13:23 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

欢迎新朋友！
...

感谢朋友雅赏！请多提意见！
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qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-03-08 03:16:18 Post subject:

田园诗歌，春意盎然。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-03-08 09:26:57 Post subject:

燕剪春风，蝶舞西东，小女歌烈，全村桃红好一幅清新的春风桃红图！欢迎新朋友！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-08 20:29:03 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

田园诗歌，春意盎然。

春天，确实是春意融融。时代变化之大，令人赞许不已。写一首诗记载，也许是一种不错的办法。
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桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-08 20:32:12 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

燕剪春风，蝶舞西东，小女歌烈，全村桃红
...

感谢黄版主审读得这么仔细！请多指出不足，以利改进！
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白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-03-11 08:27:41 Post subject:

春色欣然，意景清新。問好！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-11 19:45:16 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

春色欣然，意景清新。問好！

在新时代，心境舒畅，春色自然欣然！感谢了！
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