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风筝

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-07 14:50:17 Post subject: 风筝

风筝桃园郎一根细线系胸膛，飘在空中气宇昂。升降全由他掌控，难猜命运几分长。 _________________ 诗词艺苑欢迎你！百度“诗词艺苑”即可找到网址。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-03-08 03:21:49 Post subject:

有趣的咏物诗

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-03-08 09:03:18 Post subject:

很有哲理

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-03-08 09:09:40 Post subject:

咏物喻人，表面轩昂，然升降收放，實不由己。欢迎新朋友！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-03-08 15:45:32 Post subject:

人在江湖，身不由己。确如风筝。

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-08 20:16:47 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

有趣的咏物诗

感谢朋友来读并给予审评！
_________________
诗词艺苑欢迎你！
百度“诗词艺苑”即可找到网址。

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-08 20:17:42 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

很有哲理

请朋友多指出不足！感激！
_________________
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百度“诗词艺苑”即可找到网址。

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-08 20:21:59 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

咏物喻人，表面轩昂，然升降收放，實不由己。
欢迎新朋友！

非常感谢朋友仔细的审评！
_________________
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百度“诗词艺苑”即可找到网址。

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-03-08 20:24:46 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

人在江湖，身不由己。确如风筝。

在某些场合，人，就像那风筝，是不能自己的。
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冷雨
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Posted: 2013-04-01 11:49:01 Post subject:

问好诗友！相互学习！

桃园郎
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Posted: 2013-04-05 20:42:18 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好诗友！相互学习！

活到老，学到老！
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