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2013《黄河的日出》《黄河水啊，你是太阳的妩媚》

迪拜
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Posted: 2013-03-08 08:49:54 Post subject: 2013《黄河的日出》《黄河水啊，你是太阳的妩媚》

《黄河的日出》黄河，又日出了。黄河的日出，从来就好你不起床吗，要穿的绿军装，我已准备了男孩啊，黄土高坡昨夜的酒，可好但是，你的味道，从来就好不想对你说，你的味道，究竟有多好可是，我还是想装作不经意地告诉你黄河的日出，从来就好，却又怎比得了你睁开了睡眼，轻轻一笑《黄河水啊，你是太阳的妩媚》黄河水啊，你是太阳的妩媚即使浪涛冰封，也夺不走你北国的妖娆黄河水啊，你是太阳的妩媚看那夏日野花，哪一朵不火火在天地间唱不尽的信天游，舞不尽的闹秧歌哪一个不是对春的引航，对秋的喝彩哪一个不是如一杯美酒叫我深深沉醉一声黄河水呀，再一声，黄河水呀就这样，绵延千里，横亘广袤把你的雄伟、高贵入了天涯只愿，能用我军装的翠绿为大地播下我对你最纯洁的渴望谁家的女子，在后生的怀中，脸娇红哟汉子们的酒正飘香，婆姨们唠开了家常当那星空灿烂起黄河水啊，月光下再次美丽

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Posted: 2013-03-08 09:20:13 Post subject:

很有生活气息的军旅之歌问好

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Posted: 2013-03-08 09:55:33 Post subject:

黄河水啊，你是太阳的妩媚即使浪涛冰封，也夺不走你北国的妖娆黄河水啊，你是太阳的妩媚看那夏日野花，哪一朵不火火在天地间 ——久违了！问好迪拜！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-03-08 11:47:11 Post subject:

赏读，问好迪拜 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

迪拜
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Posted: 2013-03-09 13:15:53 Post subject:

问好白水姐姐！新的一年，一切顺利！

迪拜
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Posted: 2013-03-09 13:17:13 Post subject:

问好山城子老师！一直得到老师鼓励，谢谢！

迪拜
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Posted: 2013-03-09 13:19:15 Post subject:

问好和平岛先生！希望《北美枫》重新起航！

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Posted: 2013-03-09 13:29:42 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

问好和平岛先生！

希望《北美枫》重新起航！

回来一起努力！

迪拜
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Posted: 2013-03-15 14:11:44 Post subject:

谢和平岛肯定其实，一直都在

风墙
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Posted: 2013-03-15 21:24:10 Post subject:

我来学习！ _________________ 墙漏风了

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Posted: 2013-03-16 20:59:18 Post subject:

谁家的女子，在后生的怀中，脸娇红哟汉子们的酒正飘香，婆姨们唠开了家常当那星空灿烂起黄河水啊，月光下再次美丽有意境,有感觉，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

迪拜
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Posted: 2013-03-23 14:27:53 Post subject:

谢谢！军旅的诗歌，难写黄河的诗歌，难写几经修改个人认为，可以见人了。

迪拜
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Posted: 2013-07-26 14:34:13 Post subject:

因为边写作，边修改与别的作品，有整合，删改 2013稿件，以此为准。

双荆李子
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Posted: 2013-07-29 15:11:31 Post subject:

唱不尽的信天游，舞不尽的闹秧歌哪一个不是对春的引航，对秋的喝彩哪一个不是如一杯美酒叫我深深沉醉赏读先生佳作，学习并问好。 _________________ 宠辱不惊，俯仰无憾。

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