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远轮之《别》

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白水
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Posted: 2013-03-06 08:43:58 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

学习这种境界

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Posted: 2013-03-09 11:03:23 Post subject:

问好！这诗怎么好像一首歌曲《离别前的回忆》，有点像。春天快乐！

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Posted: 2013-03-09 11:07:57 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好！这诗怎么好像一首歌曲《离别前的回忆》，有点像。春天快乐！

我还真没听过，给个链接好吗？谢谢

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Posted: 2013-03-10 05:54:49 Post subject:

“挥挥手，便相忘于江湖” 很有一种“别如相守”的情怀，欣商。 _________________ 我是风，一阵随意的风。

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Posted: 2013-03-10 09:22:07 Post subject:

浪漫的想象，飞扬的情思，灵动的语言，朦胧的意境。学习，问好！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

白水
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Posted: 2013-03-10 13:23:24 Post subject:

鸟歌 wrote:

“挥挥手，便相忘于江湖” 很有一种“别如相守”的情怀，欣商。

谢谢理解。读诗是一个再演绎的过程，不悟庄子，不曾经历离别的人，很难读出这种感受
喜欢你的诗歌，希望读到更多的作品。问好

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Posted: 2013-03-10 13:28:30 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

浪漫的想象，飞扬的情思，灵动的语言，朦胧的意境。学习，问好！

谢谢鼓励，问好

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Posted: 2013-03-11 20:47:48 Post subject:

"你说取道向北便是新居了"已然别了，“回眸关山”却是不舍。别过！别过！“秦时明月”，“灞柳风雪”，诗行文此处可圆满矣，然不尽兴，“作者别过一首小诗”又引出一段，于是诗中套诗——高明！ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-03-12 10:06:37 Post subject:

谢谢远狼君鼓励。移居国外的人这种情感会更深些

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Posted: 2013-03-21 13:19:27 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

谢谢远狼君鼓励。移居国外的人这种情感会更深些 Embarassed

离家便是游子，远狼感你情怀！
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Posted: 2013-03-21 21:41:24 Post subject:

日子，原本就是平平淡淡的日子拧干云中的水珠，虹桥便会悄然逝去生活因为有水的柔韧与宽容才有虹桥，喜欢这样的表达。

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Posted: 2013-03-22 09:49:58 Post subject:

谢谢远狼君的理解谢谢YGHXS评阅两位周末愉快

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