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紫薇在风中燃烧(外一首)
西凉
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PostPosted: 2013-03-05 16:05:55    Post subject: 紫薇在风中燃烧(外一首) Reply with quote

紫薇在风中燃烧(外一首)

◎西凉

一棵烂漫的紫薇在风中笑着
天空响着它的铜铃
那铺开的蓝天
就是一张特大的水墨

紫薇并不孤独
桂花、紫荆、菊花都来了
在花下跑动的人们
内心洋溢着秋天的喜悦

谁说没有百日红
看那紫薇,把自己的青春
把自己的激情,燃烧得多么久
多么热烈

紫薇在风中燃烧
它让蜜蜂、蝴蝶再次翩翩起舞
它让美,在一年四季
不断地绽放

秋天

秋天是最清爽的,风把长空
擦了又擦,它瓦蓝瓦蓝的亮
只带着一丝儿云彩

叶子也都熟透了,仿佛一只只
红蜻蜓,它们在眼前翩翩飞动
然后轻轻地飘下来

河流瘦了一点点
袒露出圆润的珍珠,那纤细的
腰肢,在掌上轻轻起舞

月亮这枚老式铜镜
把大地照了又照,整个秋天就
陷进一场,刻骨铭心的相思


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西凉
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PostPosted: 2013-03-05 16:09:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

首次来投稿,问好老师!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-05 17:18:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

紫薇在风中燃烧
它让蜜蜂、蝴蝶再次翩翩起舞
它让美,在一年四季
不断地绽放

——问好西凉!!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-06 09:15:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

文笔自然而不失美感,希望读到更多
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PostPosted: 2013-03-06 10:51:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
紫薇在风中燃烧
...

感谢老师,新生请多关照!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-06 10:52:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
文笔自然而不失美感,希望读到更多

感谢了老师,问好!
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PostPosted: 2013-03-06 11:01:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

河流瘦了一点点
袒露出圆润的珍珠,那纤细的
腰肢,在掌上轻轻起舞

诗意沉稳的诗歌,欣赏
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PostPosted: 2013-03-06 20:00:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨光 wrote:
河流瘦了一点点
...

感谢杨光老师,注册好早啊!
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