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《忆秦娥. 回望》

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-02-27 03:29:19 Post subject: 《忆秦娥. 回望》

《忆秦娥. 回望》纷飞雪，蛇年伊始龙年别。龙年别，披荆踏棘，霁云明灭。飞涛数度商途冽，闲时一曲弹明月。弹明月，故园远望，几番圆缺。 2012 《忆秦娥》多用入声韵，抑扬顿挫，以助意境。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-02-27 08:00:29 Post subject:

秋叶兄以往七律望，如今弹奏秦娥亿，别有一番情趣啊。弹明月，故园远望，几番圆缺。结句很有意蕴。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-02-27 10:17:37 Post subject:

忙时飞涛商海，闲时曲弹明月。幸苦并快乐着！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-02-27 12:44:52 Post subject:

飞涛数度商途冽，闲时一曲弹明月。遥握 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-27 12:50:38 Post subject:

秋香MM回眸一笑百媚生啊好了，不开玩笑了，最高兴的是你终于从唐朝走向宋朝了

莹雪
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Posted: 2013-02-27 16:56:10 Post subject:

欣赏。

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-02-27 21:26:38 Post subject:

纷飞雪，蛇年伊始龙年别。龙年别，披荆踏棘，霁云明灭。飞涛数度商途冽，闲时一曲弹明月。弹明月，故园远望，几番圆缺。回望人生历程，一路坎坷，感慨良多。欣赏学习。问好秋叶兄！

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:18:36 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋叶兄以往七律望，如今弹奏秦娥亿，别有一番情趣啊。
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谢谢庆宏兄，七律望多了，应该搞搞新意思啊 Laughing

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:21:56 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

忙时飞涛商海，闲时曲弹明月。幸苦并快乐着！

谢谢黄老师赏读，苦中需求乐啊，贵体安康！

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:24:21 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

飞涛数度商途冽，，闲时一曲弹明月。遥握

谢谢岛主体察民情

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:26:25 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

秋香MM回眸一笑百媚生啊 Very Happy

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谢谢白水兄，你可是穿越古今中外的高手啊 Laughing

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:27:36 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

欣赏。

谢谢莹雪，高兴读到你的新作。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:29:39 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

纷飞雪，蛇年伊始龙年别。龙年别，披荆踏棘，霁云明灭。
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谢谢笑聊兄赏读，敝作匆匆草就，请多斧正。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-03-11 08:48:42 Post subject:

一曲忆秦娥，意境扶疏！問好秋叶！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-03-13 07:06:52 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

一曲忆秦娥，意境扶疏！問好秋叶！

谢谢白云兄鼓励，祝愉快!

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-03-13 07:47:53 Post subject:

问好秋叶兄！晚上回来与你唱和一曲。

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