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心情朦胧在我的黄昏

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山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-03 10:11:02 Post subject: 心情朦胧在我的黄昏

心情朦胧在我的黄昏文/ 山城子当你的心情朦胧在我的黄昏就融融的暖如晚春的扬花柳絮轻柔、绵软又温馨，舒舒爽爽在亲昵中都化作了惬意窈窕是从诗经穿越楚辞而来我靠在古诗十九首的影壁等你 “对酒当歌”的蓝舟催发你我双双地“归去来兮”养菊埋下唐诗的芬芳，宋词的味道还有元曲的跌宕流畅明清小说戏剧永放光辉的魅力共和国自由体的斑斓洋溢…… 闲余在葡萄架下筛落月影掌心里的手机赏弄佳词丽句共鸣于遍天下的朋友相互祝福结集出书的日子甜蜜着期许 2013-2-16于黔 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2013-03-03 10:18:42 Post subject:

感受得到老师的愉悦，豁达，学习老师的好心态

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-03 16:36:01 Post subject:

谢谢白水来阅！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

许登彦
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Posted: 2013-03-03 17:31:27 Post subject:

明澈的心灵荡漾着诗情画意的涟漪，豁达的人生，表达着对生活的无比热爱。许生这厢有礼了，山城子老师，问好！ _________________ 许登彦

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-03-03 19:32:32 Post subject:

有意境,有感觉，感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

钱晓强
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Posted: 2013-03-03 22:10:07 Post subject:

埋下唐诗的芬芳，宋词的味道还有元曲的跌宕流畅明清小说戏剧永放光辉的魅力共和国自由体的斑斓洋溢…… 古人善用典，今人当学习。问好！ _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-03 22:13:00 Post subject:

许登彦 wrote:

明澈的心灵荡漾着诗情画意的涟漪，豁达的人生，表达着对生活的无比热爱。许生这厢有礼了，山城子老师，问好！

问好第二代军垦人！——向你们致敬！
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-03 22:14:24 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

有意境,有感觉，感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好.

问好chenrunmin
谢谢留言鼓励！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-03 22:15:52 Post subject:

钱晓强 wrote:

埋下唐诗的芬芳，宋词的味道
...

谢谢钱晓强来阅！~晚上好！
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-03-04 07:04:37 Post subject:

纵横时空，诗思漫荡。问好老师！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-04 09:58:46 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

纵横时空，诗思漫荡。问好老师！

谢谢老周兄弟来阅！致以春天的问候！
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子在川上曰
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Posted: 2013-03-04 11:46:30 Post subject:

老师的诗歌，总是不经意间就流露出了一份古典的美。 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-04 13:46:45 Post subject:

子在川上曰 wrote:

老师的诗歌，总是不经意间就流露出了一份古典的美。

请朋友多批评。
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绿玉
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Posted: 2013-03-04 22:18:34 Post subject:

老师好，拜读，学习。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-04 23:09:45 Post subject:

绿玉 wrote:

老师好，拜读，学习。

问好绿玉！！——互相学习！！
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hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-04 23:14:34 Post subject:

我靠在古诗十九首的影壁等你暖融融的语言 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-05 09:44:12 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

我靠在古诗十九首的影壁等你

暖融融的语言

谢谢岛主鼓励！！
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特父
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Posted: 2013-03-05 09:57:51 Post subject:

赏读！

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Posted: 2013-03-05 12:00:33 Post subject:

特父 wrote:

赏读！

谢谢！！
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李长空
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Posted: 2013-03-05 12:42:00 Post subject:

充盈着一种自然韵律，学习。 _________________ 李长空博客 http://hi.baidu.com/lichangkong

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