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落日落在自己的疼痛里

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-03-02 06:26:26 Post subject: 落日落在自己的疼痛里

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杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-02 08:13:40 Post subject:

若在“疼痛里”作文章，会有不少的诗意。问好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-03-02 15:38:58 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

若在“疼痛里”作文章，会有不少的诗意。问好。 Very Happy

谢谢指点！春天好！
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钱晓强
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Posted: 2013-03-02 16:49:55 Post subject:

气魄很大，也要多注意细节。问好！ _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-03-03 19:31:14 Post subject:

很大气的诗，欣赏。问好。祝福新年，万事如意。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-03-03 21:14:18 Post subject:

钱晓强 wrote:

气魄很大，也要多注意细节。问好！

谢谢钱君的鼓励和指教！春天好！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-03 22:34:19 Post subject:

来学习老周兄弟的作品！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2013-03-04 01:16:11 Post subject:

谁说落日落在了西方谁说落日落进了老年落日落在浩瀚的疼痛中落日落在永恒的诗意里大气的手笔

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:53:20 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

很大气的诗，欣赏。问好。祝福新年，万事如意。

谢谢陈君的读赏和鼓励！春天春心！
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