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(原创新作)迷失的小鸡
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PostPosted: 2007-04-21 10:56:57    Post subject: (原创新作)迷失的小鸡 Reply with quote

迷失的小鸡
———观察从蛋壳里爬出的生命,他们小时可爱地生活在世上

转眼就迷失在快乐中
造物主在它身上显现
刚出生的生命犹如阳光般灿烂
它晒晒背 毛绒绒的像个芭比娃
从哪个方面看都是小球一团
站着也能打盹
心疼一不留神 就落地滚溜
将我心中的爱夺走

咂咂小嘴,它似乎从梦中醒来
粉红的小嘴点燃不了悠闲的情
睁开眼睛
突然发现已不是从前的世界
胸脯一上一下地抽动
终于叫出声来,一种遗弃
伤心至极


寂静。噫,什么声音
粉色的小爪轻步的移动
怯生生地打量着这个世界
一个声音滚动它的躯体
目光里闪出团团的影
它疾步地冲过来,不声不响地咂着嘴
飞快地融入伙伴中
眼光中不见一丝茫然。


二00七四月十日一稿
四月二十一终搞占白
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PostPosted: 2007-04-21 19:55:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

再稍凝练点似更好些. 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-04-22 19:51:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

睁开眼睛
突然发现已不是从前的世界
胸脯一上一下地抽动
终于叫出声来,一种遗弃
伤心至极
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PostPosted: 2007-04-23 23:04:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

从学校回到家里几天,每天阳光都灿烂无比.
吃过饭,或看看书,或晒晒太阳.然后等待妈妈从田地里回来.
在家里起得比学校里早得多,在妈妈的催促下,早饭是天天要吃的.
有时我想:要是这一辈子我都呆在妈妈的身旁该多好啊.不用熬夜,天天都早起,听鸟鸣树头.
我的心情难得这么平静过,安适过,和妈妈没有争吵过.这真是一个美好的瞬间.但是这最后
的一丝田园的梦我恐怕今后是永远享用不到啦!
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