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与自己对白的6个桥段
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PostPosted: 2013-02-24 12:55:02    Post subject: 与自己对白的6个桥段 Reply with quote



隐隐约约听见我的呼唤
莫不是日上三竿我还在慵懒的睡觉
忘记了时间也没有关系
我竟把自己弄丢在昨天



都说南方娇媚
像湖,月亮
像孤独的夜,美丽的你
就算不能爱你
依然可以将你欣赏
于是
我沉溺于南方的湖冬天的月亮
沉溺于想你的夜



不是呓语。却在午夜呢喃
是婴儿的啼哭吗
风与树婆娑,母亲与我叮嘱

吸允着黑夜的乳头
一朵乌云抚摸着我的脑呆
柔小的世界开始蠕动



多年以后,我梦见了S
我不忘一片片坠下的落叶
黄得干瘪
像一个久病的老人
于是我给这个世界写下了遗嘱
墓碑如爱情永恒



一气呵成的悲伤
循序渐进的来临
就像这个白天
慢慢地昏暗,慢慢地阴霾
慢慢地爬上明天的山岗

空旷的田野
瑟瑟的秋风
这个世界孤独得说不出再见
就像我看到满目疮痍的天空
空洞得一无所有



如果你和全世界都抛弃我
没有关系
百口莫辩不如缄口莫言
我可以写诗
赞美关于你的一切
赞美其他的幸福
赞美和我一样境遇的人们

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PostPosted: 2013-02-24 13:28:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

一气呵成的悲伤

很好
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PostPosted: 2013-02-24 13:43:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
一气呵成的悲伤

很好


谢谢朋友点评!多多批评交流为谢。
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