岷江一苇 童生
Joined: 02 Feb 2013 Posts: 87 Location: 中国四川犍为 岷江一苇Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-03 17:47:59 Post subject: 作品24号 |
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一只鸟
站在季节枝条
冷雨如鞭
寒风似刀
岁月之树颤了颤
旋了半个圆
一芽新绿
啄破春之晓 |
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chenrunmin 进士出身
Joined: 21 Nov 2009 Posts: 2427 Location: nanjing.jiangsu.china. chenrunminCollection |
Posted: 2013-02-03 22:08:50 Post subject: |
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欣赏。问好。祝福新年,万事如意。 _________________ 一个来自南京,普通大众中的人。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-04 00:20:09 Post subject: |
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一芽新绿
啄破春之晓
形象,灵动
盼与大家多交流,以文会友,相互提高 |
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岷江一苇 童生
Joined: 02 Feb 2013 Posts: 87 Location: 中国四川犍为 岷江一苇Collection |
Posted: 2013-02-04 12:33:08 Post subject: |
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谢谢!相互学习,相互提高。 |
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