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白水
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Posted: 2013-01-31 00:50:00 Post subject: 七律《冬绪》

七律《冬绪》漫舞琼花不胜春？长风残照唤诗魂，鹅毛淡扫肌如雪，玉笋轻描眉若屾。心曲绕梁无寐夜，文思泉涌夙兴晨，炎凉冷暖平常事，睥睨尘寰笑古今。

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Posted: 2013-02-01 04:57:36 Post subject:

鹅毛淡扫肌肤雪，玉笋轻描胭脂痕。祝英台终于露峥嵘了！很婉约嘛.

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Posted: 2013-02-01 05:27:14 Post subject:

读来感动。和个！冉冉东风癸巳春，祥和乐喜素心人。梳妆淡淡眉尖俏，杯酒樽樽韵味真。吟到兴时抛老境，信知高致慰闲身。玲珑碧树环青眼，小草纤尘也忘神。

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Posted: 2013-02-01 08:08:18 Post subject:

真的很婉约！漫舞琼花不胜春？长风残照唤诗魂，鹅毛淡扫肌肤雪，玉笋轻描胭脂痕。心曲绕梁三更夜，文思泉涌卯时晨，炎凉冷暖平常事，睥睨尘寰笑古今。值得学习。

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-01 10:09:14 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

鹅毛淡扫肌肤雪，玉笋轻描胭脂痕。

祝英台终于露峥嵘了！很婉约嘛. Very Happy

大风飞白雪，冰凌映日红。Toronto冬天长，习惯了，便也发现冬日的许多美来。得，我写了婉约的美，等你写豪放的美。 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-01 10:16:20 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

读来感动。和个！

冉冉东风癸巳春，祥和乐喜素心人。
梳妆淡淡眉尖俏，杯酒樽樽韵味真。
吟到兴时抛老境，信知高致慰闲身。
玲珑碧树环青眼，小草纤尘也忘神。
...

谢谢冰清姐好和，欣赏这种祥和淡泊
春节就快到了，问好节日

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-01 10:19:20 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

真的很婉约！
...

久不写古韵了，还请多指教才是。问好春节

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-02-01 13:24:25 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

鹅毛淡扫肌肤雪，玉笋轻描胭脂痕。

祝英台终于露峥嵘了！很婉约嘛. Very Happy

大风飞白雪，冰凌映日红。Toronto冬天长，习惯了，便也发现冬日的许多美来。得，我写了婉约的美，等你写豪放的美。 Very Happy

暂时拿旧作和上,豪放一下:

五绝风雪抒情

漫天风雪舞，大地素笺铺。
信步留佳句，豪情千古书。

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-01 21:50:32 Post subject:

谢谢冰清和庆宏赠诗，临屏草和，见笑五绝《和友人》袅袅梨花舞，丝帛素手铺冰清留玉笔，豪放庆宏书换字五绝《写冬》袅袅梨花舞，丝帛素手铺冰清挥玉笔，狂草向天书

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-02-01 23:47:05 Post subject:

玉笋轻描，睥睨尘寰，既露婉约，又顕豪放。欣赏！祝新春好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-02 01:26:25 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

玉笋轻描，睥睨尘寰，既露婉约，又顕豪放。欣赏！
祝新春好！

谢谢老师鼓励。好久没好好写古韵了，格律把握不好，还盼老师多指点才是。
春节快到了，祝老师万事顺意，幸福安康

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-04 08:33:14 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊发现问题，稍改。问好新春

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Posted: 2013-02-09 06:04:42 Post subject:

WOW，各位唱和俱佳，只能拿个小凳子了，祝各位新春快乐，进财多多！

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-25 03:25:18 Post subject:

哈！最喜欢最后一句

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Posted: 2013-02-25 17:53:36 Post subject:

财源滚滚！

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Posted: 2013-02-26 22:33:27 Post subject:

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财源滚滚！

thank you, MM, you too:)

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Posted: 2013-02-27 17:09:57 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

thank you, MM, you too:)

You're welcome, JJ, ha ha

Wink

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Posted: 2013-02-28 07:18:53 Post subject:

白水兄从现代走回唐朝了！

白水
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Posted: 2013-02-28 07:59:53 Post subject:

穿梭于时空隧道盼你们也穿梭

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Posted: 2013-03-02 10:47:04 Post subject:

婉约豪放巧妙结合，问好！

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