杨海军
进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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 Posted: 2007-04-19 16:25:06 Post subject: 孙继廷的诗 题梅图 |
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题梅图
孙继廷
百花竟秀我独眠
不与群芳结尘缘
为使严冬不寂寞
敢向飞雪绽笑颜
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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kokho
进士出身
Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 2007-04-20 12:07:16 Post subject: |
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拜读学习。。。
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2007-04-20 13:43:30 Post subject: 致孙兄i |
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| 拜读学习，第一行的‘’竟‘’字改为‘’竞‘’字为好，请酌定。 |
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孙继廷
秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007
Posts: 115
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-04-24 03:44:00 Post subject: |
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| 谢指教,笔误 |
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恒石
童生
Joined: 25 Apr 2007
Posts: 5
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| Posted: 2007-04-25 08:03:45 Post subject: |
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博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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| Posted: 2007-04-25 18:44:31 Post subject: |
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敢字用的滥了，个人觉得可以再思考，梅不需提敢不敢，失去自然。挺字，或别的字，自然一点的，否则主观意思太强。个见。
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孙继廷
秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007
Posts: 115
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-04-26 03:12:58 Post subject: |
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| 一语中的,佩服!以后望多提意见,谢谢 |
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