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七绝江南STYLE

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Posted: 2013-01-17 06:51:23 Post subject: 七绝江南STYLE

草上一首，以搏一灿七绝江南STYLE 潮人骑马肆奔忙，四处蹦蹦跳若狂。鸟叔原来非首创，内蒙歌舞早登场。叔—入声

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Posted: 2013-01-17 09:27:15 Post subject:

据说是山寨的“草原上的红卫兵”。

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Posted: 2013-01-17 14:43:43 Post subject:

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-01-17 19:28:57 Post subject:

问好！是的，墙内开花墙外结果。

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Posted: 2013-01-18 11:03:58 Post subject:

确实草原的骑马舞才是原创，而且比他优美多了。 “以搏一灿”应为“以博一粲”。或许秋叶有意幽他一默而自创新词，这样理解则更有味了！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2013-01-20 07:25:30 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

据说是山寨的“草原上的红卫兵”。

庆宏兄，我发现你有一同题同韵大作，所见略同啊，是否贴出共赏？

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Posted: 2013-01-20 07:26:44 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

谢谢赏读，问好莹雪。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-01-20 07:30:04 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好！是的，墙内开花墙外结果。

也问好笑聊兄，墙外结的是转基因的怪果啊 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-01-20 07:33:24 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

确实草原的骑马舞才是原创，而且比他优美多了。
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看以前的草原的骑马舞是一种享受，而这鸟叔的狂舞，俗不可耐，另，谢谢黄老师赐教，火山要比餐米要大多了 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-01-20 09:20:35 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

据说是山寨的“草原上的红卫兵”。

庆宏兄，我发现你有一同题同韵大作，所见略同啊，是否贴出共赏？

好啊！

七言·GANGNAM STYLE

文/庆宏欣

实则无味唱雌黄，一曲轻歌引癫狂。
恰似秋来百叶乱，踩歌踩舞追风忙。

（此庆宏非彼庆宏也） Very Happy

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Posted: 2013-01-20 12:29:23 Post subject:

也不知这世界如何这般疯狂，这首江南STYLE并无什么特色，竟然让这世界为之疯狂，奇怪啊！

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Posted: 2013-01-23 06:20:35 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

据说是山寨的“草原上的红卫兵”。

庆宏兄，我发现你有一同题同韵大作，所见略同啊，是否贴出共赏？

好啊！

七言·GANGNAM STYLE
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谢谢，只要够宏就行了 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-01-23 06:25:21 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

也不知这世界如何这般疯狂，这首江南STYLE并无什么特色，竟然让这世界为之疯狂，奇怪啊！

是啊，听说某省的春晚此鸟将现身 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-01-26 02:22:26 Post subject:

欣赏大作，问候秋叶！ _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2013-01-28 07:10:22 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

欣赏大作，问候秋叶！

谢谢连兄，久违了，也问好，春节是否一聚？

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Posted: 2013-01-31 00:29:45 Post subject:

灿个问好新春

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Posted: 2013-02-01 11:48:57 Post subject:

既谐又庄。哈，秋斑不失诙谐本色！

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Posted: 2013-02-09 06:07:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

灿个

问好新春

谢谢白水兄，昨天铲雪好辛苦吧，新春快乐！

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Posted: 2013-02-09 06:09:58 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

既谐又庄。
哈，秋斑不失诙谐本色！

谢谢冰清老师，赏读，春节好！明天可有空到白府一聚？

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