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夕阳红

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2012-12-08 10:41:24 Post subject: 夕阳红

. . . 鷓鴣天 . . . 雪過天清夕阳红，剪裁錦鍛飾天宫。枝摇花舞輕如夢，喜鵲迎霞笑晚風。诗情纵，韵雍容，淺吟低唱老頑童。何需計較黄昏近，重在舒怀暢快中。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2012-12-08 11:07:59 Post subject:

今日雪過天晴，夕阳展露灿烂的笑容。你看：天工巧手，剪裁美丽的錦锻粉饰着天宫；在微风撫拂下，树枝摇落的雪花轻似夢；一对喜鵲，迎着晚霞吱喳嘻戏。面对佳景，悠然诗情丰隆，挥毫泼墨淺吟低唱，十足一个老顽童。一念間，深感到：夕阳美丽又何需去计较近黄昏，人到古稀也無需去理会黃昏近，重要的是生活在舒怀暢快中！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

莹雪
进士出身

Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection

Posted: 2012-12-08 17:11:19 Post subject:

典雅情韵，畅快吟哦。

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2012-12-08 19:41:43 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

. . . 鷓鴣天 . . .
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一首鹧鸪天，畅想夕阳红。犹赏老师结句：何需計較黄昏近，
重在舒怀暢快中。

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection

Posted: 2012-12-08 22:32:53 Post subject:

心中天地阔，笔下夕阳红。

李盈枝
状元

Joined: 28 Nov 2009
Posts: 5987
Location: 中国山东
李盈枝Collection

Posted: 2012-12-08 22:39:40 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

. . . 鷓鴣天 . . .
...

白云老师晚安！大作自然、清新、流畅，犹如一气呵成。意蕴极其耐品，引人反复玩味。鲰生唯有学习欣赏的份儿。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2012-12-09 05:27:07 Post subject:

謝莹雪赏评！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2012-12-09 05:29:55 Post subject:

問好笑聊！旅游回来啦，等着欣赏你的新鲜見闻诗篇 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2012-12-09 05:33:35 Post subject:

庆宏说得好：只有心中的天地阔，才見笔下的夕阳红 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2012-12-09 05:35:40 Post subject:

盈枝言重了！互相学习，共同欣赏。謝謝！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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Posted: 2012-12-13 19:30:55 Post subject:

问好白云老师！这段时间较忙，去台湾的游记和诗作，待有空整理出来后，再让大家指正就是。

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2012-12-14 05:26:45 Post subject:

問好笑聊！工作要紧，诗赋是业余生活的调味品。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

连南河
秀才

Joined: 30 Aug 2008
Posts: 342
Location: Toronto
连南河Collection

Posted: 2013-01-01 01:26:27 Post subject:

呵呵，淺吟低唱老頑童，问候祝福，新年快乐！ _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

秋叶
秀才

Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769

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Posted: 2013-01-17 07:23:06 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

. . . 鷓鴣天 . . .
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何需計較黄昏近，重在舒怀暢快中。
金玉良言！

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2013-01-31 00:31:24 Post subject:

欣赏佳作问好新春

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