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绝句--无题
笑聊
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PostPosted: 2012-12-31 19:04:23    Post subject: 绝句--无题 Reply with quote

师友们新年好!

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小苑花稀人已空,去年何事拂春风?

无缘消受佳颜福,祈祷平安彼此同。



注:今日在惠山碧山吟社旧址召开了《纪念碧山吟社成立530周年》的大会,会后席间,有诗友提议行酒令(飞花令)着实热闹了一番。后来我提议联句大家到也同意,规则是绝句或排律都可,就有我始。出句:小苑花稀人去空。仄仄平平平仄平,有诗友说,这个太难了就你接下去吧,有诗友又说这句的第五字应是仄声,你这不合律了。这首句肯定是合律的。然后我又续了第二句:去年何事拂春风?诗友说去字与第一句中重了,我就改往年,后来因席散就没有继续。刚吃完晚饭,就把这诗续上。
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PostPosted: 2012-12-31 19:23:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

碧山吟社:始建于明代成化年间(1482年)。北宋文学家秦少游后裔无锡士绅秦旭在成化年间,择地惠山寺龙泉精舍处,建造十老堂,筑“撚须、流馨、借山、濯缨”四只亭子,凿“涵碧池”,开“芙蓉径”,堆“古木坡”。形成长杉落荫、修竹茂林的景色,同无锡的十位老人在此结社吟诗作词,初名“十字社”,后改名“碧山吟社”,是无锡历史上较早的一个诗社,也是后来无锡东林书院的先声。
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PostPosted: 2013-01-01 01:21:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候新年!
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PostPosted: 2013-01-01 21:28:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
碧山吟社:始建于明代成化年间(1482年)。北宋文学家秦少游后裔无锡士绅秦旭在成化年间,择地惠山寺龙泉精舍处,建造十老堂,筑“撚须、流馨、借山、濯缨”四只亭子,凿“涵碧池”,开“芙蓉径”,堆“古木坡”。形成长杉落荫、修竹茂林的景色,同无锡的十位老人在此结社吟诗作词,初名“十字社”,后改名“碧山吟社”,是无锡历史上较早的一个诗社,也是后来无锡东林书院的先声。


谢谢老师注解!问好!
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PostPosted: 2013-01-01 21:29:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

连南河 wrote:
问候新年!


问候连兄,新年好!
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PostPosted: 2013-01-02 01:40:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

新年快乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-01-02 09:14:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
新年快乐 Very Happy


问候白水,新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2013-01-02 10:54:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

“祈福平安彼此同”,祝笑聊兄幸福安康!
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PostPosted: 2013-01-02 11:16:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

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“祈福平安彼此同”,祝笑聊兄幸福安康!


问候黄老师!新年好!祝福老师年年幸福,岁岁安康!
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PostPosted: 2013-01-03 06:50:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗社聚诗友,新年气象新。
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PostPosted: 2013-01-03 07:40:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
诗社聚诗友,新年气象新。


问好庆宏兄!谢谢点评鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2013-01-03 10:29:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

优雅之情景,羡慕
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PostPosted: 2013-01-03 18:41:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
优雅之情景,羡慕


谢谢莹雪MM赏评!
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