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像风一样
刘华明
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 04:24:23    Post subject: 像风一样 Reply with quote

像风一样
抚摸山川、河流、庄稼
让他们的生命里多一些躁动的欲望
感觉到自己的存在

像风一样
逼近一个人的毛孔、骨骼和血液
在他的内心扎一座营 作为北漂的一员
那些车辆、马匹在雷霆中纷纷退避
枯黄的叶子 破败的花朵
还有树上的两只麻雀
丁客一样担忧着晚年的命运

像风一样
吹散积雪的坚硬
吹走岁月的浮尘
让一切开始流动
包括一座山的想法、一池水的梦游、一片云的高度
只留下一双鞋的秘密搁置在黑暗里
让镜子胡乱的揣摩

像风一样
不断团聚又不断离散
从虚无中来 走向虚无

这个有风的傍晚
一个我在世间打坐
另一个我已不知去向
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 12:19:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个有风的傍晚
一个我在世间打坐
另一个我已不知去向

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nobody
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 17:35:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个有风的傍晚
一个我在世间打坐
另一个我已不知去向

前面精炼些,就完美了。
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