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【一尊雕塑的宿命】

远狼
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Posted: 2012-12-22 16:06:34 Post subject: 【一尊雕塑的宿命】

【一尊雕塑的宿命】我只是习惯的孤独不发一言认真地站直立于一地四方风来看尘土乱舞没有记忆中的亏欠与盈满也不用惶惶然然吁吁叹叹乘除加减语言冗繁剜割与透析八卦周易怎样算，一天一天路途的长短风筝飞不远生命几十年张扬与矜持朝觐或观瞻多少在意与敷衍于我何干多少真实和编纂的故事又于我何干我只是那时你不老的容颜风老了你我，却唯有时光做我的棺椁却唯有风暴将我入殓 2009.10.26 …… 2012.12.23改 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

子在川上曰
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Posted: 2012-12-22 20:30:47 Post subject:

我只是那时你不老的容颜风老了你我，却唯有时光做我的棺椁却唯有风暴将我入殓写得真好，问好朋友。 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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Posted: 2012-12-24 23:49:00 Post subject:

子在川上曰 wrote:

我只是那时你不老的容颜
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这是远狼的一篇习作，修改了几次总不得意，这次好歹像样些了呵呵 Embarassed

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chenrunmin
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Posted: 2012-12-25 17:59:32 Post subject:

多少在意与敷衍于我何干多少真实和编纂的故事又于我何干我只是那时你不老的容颜风老了你我，却唯有时光做我的棺椁却唯有风暴将我入殓 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2012-12-31 13:25:56 Post subject:

质感，耐品。问好新年

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Posted: 2012-12-31 15:01:47 Post subject:

“唯有时光做我的棺椁”这样的角度入手很好。提读。

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Posted: 2013-01-03 17:17:20 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

多少在意与敷衍于我何干
...

问好chenrunmin君
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http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-01-03 17:21:22 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

质感，耐品。问好新年

成此形历数次呢

新年好！
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Posted: 2013-01-03 17:22:40 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

“唯有时光做我的棺椁”这样的角度入手很好。提读。

三年得一句啊！
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