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老師

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Posted: 2012-12-20 11:07:59 Post subject: 老師

老師你的聲音穿過黑板，課桌和窗外那棵單薄的小樹穿過牆上掛著的萬水千山一如正午某束陽光穿過無休無止飛揚的粉塵失落多年的書聲琅琅在一瞬間震落電話上堆積的寂寥過盡千帆我的心被時光澄淨剩下一片空明 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

金金
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Posted: 2012-12-20 14:23:01 Post subject:

末段有感觉！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2012-12-20 20:02:52 Post subject:

欣赏。问好。龙年快乐幸福，吉祥如意！ _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

青洋
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Posted: 2012-12-22 04:06:54 Post subject:

謝謝金金，謝謝陳潤民，祝聖誕快樂！ _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

远狼
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Posted: 2012-12-24 23:00:56 Post subject:

与金金同感 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

金金
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Posted: 2012-12-25 17:34:06 Post subject:

再来看，第二段的感觉真好，再过上个N年来看，可能更有情怀和新意外的惊喜。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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