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旧稿:黄瓜架下(外两首)
山城子
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PostPosted: 2012-12-15 10:55:22    Post subject: 旧稿:黄瓜架下(外两首) Reply with quote

旧稿:黄瓜架下(外两首)
文/ 山城子

清晨
水灵灵的第一件事
就是来看你
顶着花的生长

你就笑,吃吃的
怕你爸爸听见
笑出眼泪
你说才不是呢
那是露珠

(2004/11/1)


打碗碗花

穿着紫白相间的衣衫
从春天
一直走到秋天
有时就在篱笆外相遇
你的微笑
总是朦胧着腼腆

(2004/10/28)


笆篱外的蚕豆花

你紫黑紫黑的眼珠
衬着淡青的眼白
晶亮晶亮地
穿过篱笆缝儿。望过来

其实我知道
你的心事
但,我不能越过篱笆
……

(2007/3/16)
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PostPosted: 2012-12-15 23:50:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

溢满生活气息,欣赏
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PostPosted: 2012-12-17 17:02:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.
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PostPosted: 2012-12-20 10:19:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

清新。生活氣息濃厚。
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PostPosted: 2012-12-20 14:26:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

吃吃的


啥意思
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PostPosted: 2012-12-20 17:01:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.

谢谢朋友!!!
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PostPosted: 2012-12-20 17:02:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
溢满生活气息,欣赏


——寒食节快乐!!!
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PostPosted: 2012-12-20 17:03:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

青洋 wrote:
清新。生活氣息濃厚。


谢谢青洋!!
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PostPosted: 2012-12-20 17:04:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

“吃吃”——象声词,压抑的笑声。
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