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Posted: 2012-12-04 05:21:00 Post subject: 鏡中人

鏡中人此刻鏡中的面容平靜而綺麗童年貼在狹窄的額上靜靜地，像一朵陰沉的烏雲青春期激烈的皮鞭垂下了留下沙漠般乾枯的嘴唇此刻湖水意味深長的安詳在疲倦的眼睛裏漫延另一面鏡子碎了另一個擁擠著色彩和形體的鬧市另一頭噴吐火焰扭曲不安的斯芬克斯漂滿了稚嫩青苔的湖面深黑色的疼痛船錨一般下沉下沉此刻鏡中抬起下巴堅定而果決將對自由生命的愛戀凝聚成嘴角的一粒墨 2012-4-29 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-12-04 07:16:45 Post subject:

另一頭噴吐火焰扭曲不安的斯芬克斯漂滿了稚嫩青苔的湖面

金金
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Posted: 2012-12-06 16:28:16 Post subject:

有感觉，语势不错！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2012-12-07 09:03:03 Post subject:

此刻鏡中抬起下巴堅定而果決將對自由生命的愛戀凝聚成嘴角的一粒墨 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2012-12-08 11:34:48 Post subject:

此刻鏡中抬起下巴堅定而果決將對自由生命的愛戀凝聚成嘴角的一粒墨喜欢。 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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Posted: 2012-12-08 12:32:05 Post subject:

进行语言的各种尝试,最终找到最适合自己的最自然的方式 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-12-13 08:44:29 Post subject:

问好！

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Posted: 2012-12-20 10:15:39 Post subject:

謝謝各位詩人來評，祝大家聖誕快樂！ _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-12-20 10:30:06 Post subject:

问好青洋老师！

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Posted: 2012-12-20 10:32:10 Post subject:

問好冷雨，節日快樂! _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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