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将军

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Posted: 2012-12-13 20:25:16 Post subject: 将军

造神他把一具即将滑出桌面的泥塑放回中心很是仔细的抹平裂纹专注的涂彩竟始料不及，一劫之后，那泥胎真的成了伟大的神祇风在桌面回旋他邀他一同做神他夺门而逃从此藏匿山洞不再出 2012/12/14 将军他曾是赫赫有名的大将军亲自指挥几次宏大的战役如今在他的别墅深居简出怕灿烂的阳光和一切鸟的歌声为了取悦他于白昼，机灵的警卫员精心的策划一个战场的黑夜他独自在黑暗里划一根火柴，笑嘻嘻的陶醉于那硫磺气味里他深度失眠只有颠簸的马背才能让他鼾声四起 2012/12/14 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2012-12-14 04:47:25 Post subject:

将军有将军的活法。问好周末

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-12-14 18:02:38 Post subject:

猜一猜，我写的谁？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

冷雨
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Posted: 2012-12-14 19:33:24 Post subject:

被几个老顽童打出南山的那个，得相思病的那个。问好！

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Posted: 2012-12-16 00:06:21 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

猜一猜，我写的谁？

冲浪好，我还真没猜到呢。 Laughing

雨说得对吗？

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-12-16 17:48:04 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

被几个老顽童打出南山的那个，得相思病的那个。问好！

呵呵，你说的这个我不知道是谁，我说的这个是一位元帅，曾经被唾骂。
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Posted: 2012-12-18 07:09:20 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

猜一猜，我写的谁？

冲浪好，我还真没猜到呢。 Laughing

...

你前天发了多次都没成功。我写的是一位政治人物，倍受争议。感觉人生才是最美的风景，从别人的人生可以看到更深刻的东西。
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青洋
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Posted: 2012-12-20 10:24:02 Post subject:

你說的是誰呢？ _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-12-20 10:27:52 Post subject:

木秀于林，风必摧之…… 问好！

金金
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Posted: 2012-12-20 14:24:37 Post subject:

有风骨，哥舒夜带刀。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-12-29 20:03:19 Post subject:

问好青羊、冷雨、金金。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

骨笛
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Posted: 2012-12-30 15:39:36 Post subject:

应该说林帅倒是个趣人 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2013-01-02 17:19:45 Post subject:

骨笛 wrote:

应该说林帅倒是个趣人

一个人的真实，很难通过报纸的东西难判断。
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吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2013-01-03 09:00:24 Post subject:

传神的描写，诗意的提炼！ _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2013-01-05 12:25:45 Post subject:

问好冲浪兄,新年快乐! _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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