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新诗 – 留白
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PostPosted: 2012-12-06 12:15:38    Post subject: 新诗 – 留白 Reply with quote

留白 魏鹏展

密密实实的字里行间
按一按间隔键
留一点空间
主调中重复了副歌
高潮后的一个休止符
此处无声胜有声
小屋的墙上画上一个小窗
未喝完的茶色旁
红得太红的口红
七十一的绿色
路边的小草还有
麻雀的褐色
橙色的月台上
站着又是橙色裙的
血色的高跟鞋
绿公仔闪烁
画纸的尺寸太小
轻轻画上红灯
空荡荡的马路上还有
一行行白色斑马线

2012年10月23日 下午
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PostPosted: 2012-12-06 16:20:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

地道港味
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PostPosted: 2012-12-06 17:52:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

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地道港味


謝謝!
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PostPosted: 2012-12-06 21:28:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

读诗如临其境
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PostPosted: 2012-12-06 21:52:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
读诗如临其境


謝謝
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PostPosted: 2012-12-08 15:48:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

不知道你认识不认识姚遥(露姹)?
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PostPosted: 2012-12-08 21:45:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

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不知道你认识不认识姚遥(露姹)?




不認識。她是甚麼人?
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PostPosted: 2012-12-11 18:04:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

也是你们本地的一个女诗人,也是搞教育的
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PostPosted: 2012-12-13 02:25:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

80後的風格,感覺上像一幅現代派的油畫。
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PostPosted: 2012-12-13 08:41:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!
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PostPosted: 2012-12-13 17:02:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

青洋 wrote:
80後的風格,感覺上像一幅現代派的油畫。




謝謝你﹗
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