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幸福并不都挂在每个人的脸上
游戏诗歌
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PostPosted: 2012-11-24 13:45:25    Post subject: 幸福并不都挂在每个人的脸上 Reply with quote

幸福并不都挂在每个人的脸上

游戏诗歌 作

我住在二楼,二楼离天堂还远
我想住进五楼
五楼可以看到天堂红色的大门
看到门外那些沉默的灵魂
飘来飘去
不能发出任何声响
我知道,天堂并不能随意出进

每天早晨,我都要下楼
一楼让我迈入凡间
拐过小河湾,向左,再向左
你将看到人来人往
走路的人,骑车的人
坐小轿车的人,身背麻袋的人
脸上写满忧郁的人
我发现凡间一个基本的事实
幸福并不都挂在每个人的脸上

2005-11-5
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PostPosted: 2012-11-24 17:19:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这样的诗歌,不再虚无缥缈的诗歌,才是真正的诗歌。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-25 10:18:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

平淡之中见真实,实在好诗
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PostPosted: 2012-11-26 05:35:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首诗歌的确不错,无论从墨着点还是构思选词。谢谢分享
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PostPosted: 2012-11-27 11:31:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

我发现凡间一个基本的事实
幸福并不都挂在每个人的脸上
。。。。。观察细腻。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-30 10:59:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

我是幸福的!在医院守护老人两天两没休息,他老人家醒来后吃力的对我说了两个字:不孝! 我很感动……
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PostPosted: 2012-11-30 12:30:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

重读一边,温故而知新。

也许,因为幸福没有挂在每个人的脸上,所以央视才派人一遍遍问:你幸福吗?
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