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神游泰山
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PostPosted: 2012-11-28 07:46:38    Post subject: 神游泰山 Reply with quote

. . . 鷓鴣天 . . .

巍峨東岳景致新 ,
千寻峰嶺脫凡塵 。
摩崖石刻古風韵 ,
参拜皇宫恭敬神 。

天街上 ,
入天門 ,
登天此際夢成真 。
抒情远眺群山小 ,
豪氣縱横脚踏雲 。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-28 07:57:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏了笑聊的《登泰山有感》,特别是看了笑聊的泰山游的详细介绍,尤似親历其境,一种神游仙山之意逸然于胸間,便悠然揮筆,暢书一曲《鹧鴣天 - 神游泰山》,与笑聊唱和,与朋友們同樂!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-28 09:01:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

善哉!有幸与白云兄梦游泰山一回!
泰山,实在令人神往。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-28 17:09:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
欣赏了笑聊的《登泰山有感》,特别是看了笑聊的泰山游的详细介绍,尤似親历其境,一种神游仙山之意逸然于胸間,便悠然揮筆,暢书一曲《鹧鴣天 - 神游泰山》,与笑聊唱和,与朋友們同樂!
好一个神游!如同亲历。欢迎白云老师有机会时来泰山“亲游”。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-28 20:59:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢白云老师唱和,这首词写的神了。喜欢结句:抒情远眺群山小 ,豪氣縱横脚踏雲 。逍遥神仙哦!我写不出这样的词语,过下月十日定当唱和。(最近忙于工作,三号又要出去游玩-台湾,到十日回来。)
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PostPosted: 2012-11-29 02:10:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝黄兄!共同神游泰山一回 - 妙!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-29 02:13:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

衷心致謝盈枝的热情邀请!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-29 02:18:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,你真懂得生活,又去台湾一游啦!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-29 19:33:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云老师的词写的真好,暂把登泰山口占诗回和一下:

临风横槊与谁知?驾雾腾云恰当时。

难表神仙多快乐,逍遥自有世人痴。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-30 04:34:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊和诗!笑聊,你真是暢意遍游世間景!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-30 08:04:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄刚登泰山,又游台湾,真的逍遥似仙啊。白云老师也跟着你神游了一趟东岳,你们留下美诗佳词,也引得我草上一首《泰山》,大家唱和一乐。
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PostPosted: 2012-11-30 09:44:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏,好的大家唱和同乐,活跃身心,丰盛生活!
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PostPosted: 2012-11-30 13:05:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白云老师鼓励人生积极向上!谢谢美妙和词,让我留下深刻印象。
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PostPosted: 2012-12-01 04:48:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,在相互唱和中,诗友们共同愉悦身心,欢渡红尘岁月!
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PostPosted: 2012-12-08 17:50:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄刚登泰山,又游台湾,真的逍遥似仙啊。白云老师也跟着你神游了一趟东岳,你们留下美诗佳词,也引得我草上一首《泰山》,大家唱和一乐。


庆宏兄好!我刚回来,还来不及和师友们唱和。容我整理后再写出来,一起同乐!
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