白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-28 07:46:38 Post subject: 神游泰山 |
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. . . 鷓鴣天 . . .
巍峨東岳景致新 ,
千寻峰嶺脫凡塵 。
摩崖石刻古風韵 ,
参拜皇宫恭敬神 。
天街上 ,
入天門 ,
登天此際夢成真 。
抒情远眺群山小 ,
豪氣縱横脚踏雲 。 _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-28 07:57:39 Post subject: |
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欣赏了笑聊的《登泰山有感》,特别是看了笑聊的泰山游的详细介绍,尤似親历其境,一种神游仙山之意逸然于胸間,便悠然揮筆,暢书一曲《鹧鴣天 - 神游泰山》,与笑聊唱和,与朋友們同樂! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-28 09:01:32 Post subject: |
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善哉!有幸与白云兄梦游泰山一回!
泰山,实在令人神往。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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李盈枝 状元

Joined: 28 Nov 2009 Posts: 5987 Location: 中国山东 李盈枝Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-28 17:09:56 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
欣赏了笑聊的《登泰山有感》,特别是看了笑聊的泰山游的详细介绍,尤似親历其境,一种神游仙山之意逸然于胸間,便悠然揮筆,暢书一曲《鹧鴣天 - 神游泰山》,与笑聊唱和,与朋友們同樂! |
好一个神游!如同亲历。欢迎白云老师有机会时来泰山“亲游”。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-28 20:59:14 Post subject: |
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感谢白云老师唱和,这首词写的神了。喜欢结句:抒情远眺群山小 ,豪氣縱横脚踏雲 。逍遥神仙哦!我写不出这样的词语,过下月十日定当唱和。(最近忙于工作,三号又要出去游玩-台湾,到十日回来。) |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-29 02:10:45 Post subject: |
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謝黄兄!共同神游泰山一回 - 妙! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-29 02:13:54 Post subject: |
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衷心致謝盈枝的热情邀请! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-29 02:18:36 Post subject: |
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笑聊,你真懂得生活,又去台湾一游啦! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-29 19:33:43 Post subject: |
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白云老师的词写的真好,暂把登泰山口占诗回和一下:
临风横槊与谁知?驾雾腾云恰当时。
难表神仙多快乐,逍遥自有世人痴。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-30 04:34:44 Post subject: |
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謝笑聊和诗!笑聊,你真是暢意遍游世間景! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2012-11-30 08:04:06 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄刚登泰山,又游台湾,真的逍遥似仙啊。白云老师也跟着你神游了一趟东岳,你们留下美诗佳词,也引得我草上一首《泰山》,大家唱和一乐。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-11-30 09:44:32 Post subject: |
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庆宏,好的大家唱和同乐,活跃身心,丰盛生活! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-11-30 13:05:47 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云老师鼓励人生积极向上!谢谢美妙和词,让我留下深刻印象。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2012-12-01 04:48:39 Post subject: |
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笑聊,在相互唱和中,诗友们共同愉悦身心,欢渡红尘岁月! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2012-12-08 17:50:37 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
笑聊兄刚登泰山,又游台湾,真的逍遥似仙啊。白云老师也跟着你神游了一趟东岳,你们留下美诗佳词,也引得我草上一首《泰山》,大家唱和一乐。 |
庆宏兄好!我刚回来,还来不及和师友们唱和。容我整理后再写出来,一起同乐! |
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