勿妄言 秀才
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-18 19:58:55    Post subject: [原创]春夜读雨 | 
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				春时夜雨潜入梦,
 
 
呢喃细语话迷朦;
 
 
落花不必借春风,
 
 
断肠何须待清明。 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃,尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中,让风有了色彩,有了声音,更有了自己的形象; | 
			 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-19 13:07:42    Post subject:  | 
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				寄秋蔷
 
.    kokho
 
 
夜雨催风月不争
 
滴答无语枕边冷
 
未忌天明花叶数
 
她红我绿春夏更
 
 
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		杨海军 进士出身
 
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				 Posted: 2007-04-19 16:41:26    Post subject:  | 
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				好诗!!和kokho诗人一首《梅》
 
  
 
  梅
 
  
 
  孙继廷
 
 
孤傲不与百花争
 
报春何惧严冬冷
 
喜得人间增佳色
 
清香暗流透残更 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
 
——拙作《离开村庄》
 
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		晓松 举人
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-19 19:17:50    Post subject:  | 
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				| 楼上几位个性鲜明,不拘一格。极其喜欢! | 
			 
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		勿妄言 秀才
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-19 23:07:36    Post subject:  | 
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				丈夫当豪迈,女儿自婉旖;书生守清雅,魁星指真谛。   _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃,尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中,让风有了色彩,有了声音,更有了自己的形象; | 
			 
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		勿妄言 秀才
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-20 00:44:16    Post subject:  | 
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				复kokho
 
 
 
红销翠减春更夏
 
 
巴山蜀水满目画
 
 
更待他日君归踏
 
 
漫卷秋雨笑语花 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃,尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中,让风有了色彩,有了声音,更有了自己的形象; | 
			 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-20 01:11:19    Post subject:  | 
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	  好诗!!和kokho诗人一首《梅》
 
  
 
  梅
 
  
 
  孙继廷
 
 
孤傲不与百花争
 
报春何惧严冬冷
 
喜得人间增佳色
 
清香暗流透残更 | 
	 
 
 
 
谢 海军 这首韵浑然天成,我写的叙事多欠工整  :))
 
 
希望能见到。更多他的作品。。。
 
 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-20 01:12:07    Post subject:  | 
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	  | 楼上几位个性鲜明,不拘一格。极其喜欢! | 
	 
 
 
 
我还得多努力。。。
 
 
 
惭愧        
 
 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-20 01:13:21    Post subject:  | 
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	  丈夫当豪迈,女儿自婉旖;书生守清雅,魁星指真谛。   | 
	 
 
 
 
我可是  狂生乱涂鸦  ;))
 
 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-20 01:15:30    Post subject:  | 
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	  复kokho
 
 
 
红销翠减春更夏
 
 
巴山蜀水满目画
 
 
更待他日君归踏
 
 
漫卷秋雨笑语花 | 
	 
 
 
 
 
秋蔷  可要说话算话 我到了成都伲可要接待哟。。。
 
。     我买机票去  ;)
 
 
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		勿妄言 秀才
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-20 03:47:26    Post subject:  | 
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				有朋自远方来,不亦悦乎?
 
来了自当好好"烧烤烧烤"你啦.      _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃,尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中,让风有了色彩,有了声音,更有了自己的形象; | 
			 
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		kokho 进士出身
  
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				 Posted: 2007-04-20 12:06:45    Post subject:  | 
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				看来 这不关盐分 实在是在劫难逃 ;))
 
 
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